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2020考研英语作文高分攻略二:建议信3

时间:2019-09-29 09:38:18 编辑:wangjinjin
2020考研英语作文高分攻略二:建议信3     

      

      考研英语写作部分由A、B两节组成,主要考查考生的书面表达能力,评分时需要根据文章的内容和语言来确定文章档次,所以掌握考研英语写作的技巧是十分重要的。小编在这里就为大家带来2020考研英语作文高分攻略的相关内容,供大家参考。

考场9分范文:

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am a student in this university who regularly come to the library to spend my spare time .

Generally speaking,the services you offer here is quite good;however,I have some suggestions for you to adopt,And I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions into consideration.

To begin with,will you please prolong the time for reading?In the daytime,most of the students are having classes,so they can't come to the library. Moreover,some of the books on shelves are out of date.If you are so kind as to provide us some books such as the latest magazines.we will be greatly honored.

I really wish to have a more comfortable library.Thank you for your time and consideration.

Sincerely yours,

Li Ming

 

点评:

Dear Sir/Madam,

既然是写信,就要有对收信人的称谓。但由于并不知道收信人的准确身份和性别,用这样的方式应该说是恰当的。

I am a student in this university who regularly come to the library to spend my spare time .

首先要“自报家门”。这样既显得礼貌,又增加了信函的可信度。

Generally speaking,the services you offer here is quite good;however,I have some suggestions for you to adopt,And I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions into consideration.

肯定对方的工作成绩,而非全盘否定;这样 无疑会赢得收信人的善意和好感,有利于收信人接受建议。美中不足:此句和上句均有些许语法错误(见斜体部分,下同),当然这并不影响表达。再示善意,也是委婉地希望对方接受自己的建议。

To begin with,will you please prolong the time for reading?In the daytime,most of the students are having classes,so they can't come to the library. Moreover,some of the books on shelves are out of date.If you are so kind as to provide us some books such as the latest magazines.we will be greatly honored.

具体建议,内容合情合理。尽管这仅仅是考试中的作文,但这一点也不可小觑。碧玉微瑕:greatly honored(不胜荣幸)用在此处,略显得有些“过”——对常规工作加以改善,并非写信者本人做出“额外”或“超标”的服务,自然无需“过谦”。如果改成“very pleased”,表述则更为恰当、贴切。

I really wish to have a more comfortable library.Thank you for your time and consideration.

Sincerely yours,

Li Ming

以善意和礼貌结尾。

总评:

内容正确;表述基本准确;结构完整、合理;语气适当。虽有些许小的语法错误,但并未影整体表达,故得分为9分。

     

      以上就是小编今天跟大家分享的2020考研英语写作攻略二的内容,希望考生通过不断积累考研英语高分作文写作方法,在写作部分取得好成绩。祝大家考研顺利!

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