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      考研英语大作文想要写好，不仅要靠积累好的句子来背诵之外，还需靠练和改。接下来，小编为帮助考研儿们，快速掌握一定的写作方法，特意分享——考研英语一大作文考前冲刺:毅力，供考生参考。

考研英语一大作文考前冲刺:毅力

毅力

Directions：

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing.In your essay， you should

1) describe the drawing briefly，

2) explain its intended meaning，and

3) give your comments.

You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET .( 20 points)

参考范文

As we can see from the picture， a man was digging wells，but he did not make persistent efforts，giving up before hitting the water and leaving all sizes of holes on ground.

The picture indicates the importance of perseverance. First of all，perseverance can help us carve out a way to success，although the way to success is bumpy and full of inevitable setbacks.Without perseverance，it will not be possible for Thomas Edison to succeed in producing the first electric lamp after numerous times of failure. Furthermore，perseverance enables us to achieve unthinkable feats.Helen Keller，though born blind and deaf，never lost heart and persisted in learning how to read and write in spite of great difficulties.Her efforts were rewarded with worldwide recognition and she became a famous writer.

The road to success is dotted with thorns.When being caught up in trouble，we should bite the bullet and stick to our efforts，and then our persistence will be handsomely rewarded.Just as what Benjamin Franklin once said，“Energy and persistence conquer all things.”

参考译文

从这幅图可以看到，一个人正在挖井，但他没有持续努力，在挖到水之前就放弃了，只留下地面上一个个或深或浅的洞。

这幅图强调了毅力的重要性。首先，毅力能帮助我们走向成功，虽然成功之路并不平坦且不可避免地充满挫折。如果没有毅力，托马斯•爱迪生不可能在多次尝试失败之后成功发明第一个电灯。此外，毅力可以助力我们成就难以想象的壮举。海伦•凯勒虽然生来聋哑，但从未灰心，不顾巨大的困难一直坚持学习读写。她的努力得到了全世界的认同，成为了一名著名的作家。

成功之路总有荆棘。当陷入困境的时候，我们应该咬紧牙关坚持努力，我们的毅力将获得丰厚的回报。正如本杰明•富兰克林所说：“能量和毅力能征服一切。”

亮点表达

1.to carve out a way to success走向成功(在说什么会带来成功时，除了用sth. will lead to success之外，sth. can helps sb. carve out a way to success.也是非常好的句式。如：Dedication can help people carve out a way to success.)

2.Sb.'s efforts are rewarded with worldwide recognition.某人的努力得到了全世界的认同。(在举名人例子时，说他们的努力使他们获得回报，可以用这个句式。如：Jack Ma's efforts are rewarded with worldwide recognition.)

      以上是“考研英语一大作文考前冲刺:毅力”，希望对备考英语一的考研者们，在大作文写作上面有所帮助!

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